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The build excerpt says "Son of a long dead blade member," I assume you want to change that to "Daughter."

By calciumstrength on Mar 4, 2019
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Nice backstory! There is some potential here, although you may want to work on your spelling and grammar.
A few questions:
- How does she use the lightning spells. First as a ranged attack when her opponents are far away, then switch to sword and shield?
- You say that her race is Imperial, but the battle cry in the backstory suggests that she is a Nord. If she is the daughter of Acilius Bolar, she would indeed be an Imperial, but maybe using Voice of the Emperor is an alternative.

By overtone on Feb 26, 2019
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Thanks for the feedback. I wrote the whole thing in like 10 minutes at work so I did not have time to edit and fix my mistakes. Will do it as soon as I have some peace of mind.
-She uses the lightning spells when she deems it necessary: Killing draugr that are pining her down with a bow, using it as initial assault to close the distance on a thalmor mage, shooting dragons on flight, and cloaking herself when she is outnumberd. The point of her magic use is doing what her sword cannot. If she can take an opponent just with her blade she will not use magic.
-The battle cry was meant more to be a form of her voice, not the nord power. Kida like she screamed so loudly and used an echo of a Thu'um. I will change it to a war cry or something of the kind.

By SoulKing on Feb 27, 2019
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Update the backstory a bit

By SoulKing on Feb 27, 2019
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